Wednesday, February 13, 2008
Fatima Ahmed
My name is Fatima. I am 18 years old. I am from Abu Dhabi. I live with my family. I have 2 brothers and 3 sisters. I am a student at Zayed University. I am in level 7 . I will do my best to pass this level . I have studied level 5 and level 6. In the university the life is very different from the life in the school. We can do many things that we can’t do in the school . We can use our mobile in the break, we don’t wear a uniform and our study in the laptop. After I finish class I go home I set with my family having lunch with them . After that my cousin come to my house. We set together talking and watching movie . After I get dinner I go walking about one hour with my sister. My hobbies are cooking and reading stories . I wish I can pass the studying in the university.
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Hi Fatima, you need to take much more care over your punctuation. You've got 5 errors in this piece of writing which gives you a Poor grade. If you want a better grade why not try to do an extra piece of writing on one of the other subjects from week one?
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