Wednesday, February 13, 2008

My name is Mariam and I’m 18 years old. I’m in level 7 and I hope that I will pass it with good grads and enter level 8. I live with a nice family. I have 5 brothers and 4 sisters and very nice and kind mother but we miss the most important person in our family because he died before 6 month and this person is my father.3 of my sisters and 2 of my brothers have been married. I like their children and I spend a lot of time with them and also they like me because I play with them and I give them a lot of chocolate. One of my brothers works as an electrical engineering and the other one works as a computer programmer and one of them works as a soldier and one of my sister works as a teacher and the others stay in their home with their children. That is all thing about me and my family. I hope you enjoy reading about me.

1 comment:

Zurob said...

Hi Mariam,
This gets an Excellent grade as there are no punctuation errors. However, try not to use so many 'and's in one sentence. I counted 4 in one sentence!!